SHOULDN'T
by
Jade A. Waters
I know I shouldn’t
Want you like this
Shouldn’t
Feel this way with you
Need you like I do
Want
All the things I get from you
And yet I keep thinking it’s
You
That is the answer
You that makes me crave
This
I don’t even think you see it
Because it’s not possible this
Way
I guess I’m loving you from afar
Trying not to let it show
But
It hurts too much
Feels too good and so
I
Will try to ignore it for
There’s nothing more to
Do
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I absolutely love everything about this poem. From the hint of recursion and the more explicit duality in it’s structure. From the message to the deep seeded emotion. Was a lovely thing to see today. Bravo!
Thank you, FT, for these wonderful words. I’m so happy to hear you enjoyed it! 🙂
i actually felt my heart and breath move to the rhythm of this Jade, wow!
Oh, wow! What a lovely, lovely comment. Thank you! XX
A beautiful poem, and beautifully structured too 🙂
Rebel xox
Thank you so much, Marie! XX
I absolutely love this 🙂
Thank you!
Such beautiful words.
Thank you so much. 🙂